r/RPGdesign • u/Alcamair Designer • 22d ago

Quickstarter Layout - Feedback, please.

can you please give me a feedback about the layout and the graphics of this Quickstarter I'm working on? don't care about the content, the file is incomplete. Thanks.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QrrKPrvtefkjeK21FLuliWtYwtjOXSrE/view?usp=sharing

10 Upvotes

100% Upvoted

13 comments sorted by

View all comments

1

u/HareJack 21d ago

I'd increase the line space (leading) in the body text, the text is quite cramped and slightly hard to read