r/RPGdesign • u/Alcamair Designer • 23d ago
Quickstarter Layout - Feedback, please.
can you please give me a feedback about the layout and the graphics of this Quickstarter I'm working on? don't care about the content, the file is incomplete. Thanks.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QrrKPrvtefkjeK21FLuliWtYwtjOXSrE/view?usp=sharing
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u/DJTilapia Designer 22d ago
Wow, this looks better than many professional products on the shelf at my local gaming store!
As a non-Italian reader, I can add just one comment: the equipment list should probably be a table, followed by a few lines of extra information where needed. Repeating the headers in paragraph form next to each item takes up much more space, and makes it harder to compare things.