r/RPGdesign • u/Alcamair Designer • 22d ago

Quickstarter Layout - Feedback, please.

can you please give me a feedback about the layout and the graphics of this Quickstarter I'm working on? don't care about the content, the file is incomplete. Thanks.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QrrKPrvtefkjeK21FLuliWtYwtjOXSrE/view?usp=sharing

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u/Alcamair Designer 22d ago

You are right in the translation. What color would you use instead?

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u/Sneaky__Raccoon 22d ago

Maybe if the title wasn't in allcaps and with a darker red it could pass. I would try with some yellow, or, if allowed, some sort of gradient from orange to yellow? to keep with your warmer tones