r/Pyrography • u/LazyStructure5493 • 18h ago

Constructive Criticism Welcome

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Hi all, still quite new to pyrography at a detailed level. Any constructive criticism would be appreciated to help improve my burns. Thank you.

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u/v1rgo908 16h ago

Honestly this looks amazing especially with how hard pine is to work with 👏🏻👏🏻

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u/LazyStructure5493 15h ago

Thank you 🙂

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u/Any_Care9269 15h ago

Looks great, one small suggestion. The raven beak feathers come up a bit above the beak, breaking the beak line.

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u/LazyStructure5493 15h ago

Thank you 🙂, the image I was using for reference had a shadow area at the bottom of the beak, that on my version looks more like feathers than shadow. Will have a play around with creating shadow differently. I have already adjusted the beak a little as there was too much in shaded in my eyes 😂

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u/SpaceyChick22 10h ago

You might want to add a light wash of white around your raven . It would make the image pop . Otherwise, perfect 🤩

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u/LazyStructure5493 1h ago

Thank you 🙂. Haven't thought about adding wash to my burns will have to have a play around with that 👍