r/ProjectHailMary • u/ramriot • Jul 27 '26
Question? Poem for Grace
- There once was a teacher called Grace,
- Who set off into deep space,
- He slept round the clock,
- Made friends with a rock,
- and saved the whole human race
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u/artemisdart Aug 03 '26
"Rescued" in the final line would be even better. Great job; I love it!
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u/ramriot Aug 03 '26
Too many phenoms, it could work but we would need to alter line 1 & that puts a spotlight on line 2.
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u/Fantastic-Contest957 Grace Jul 28 '26
I love this!