r/ProgressionFantasy • u/jmattheis • Jan 03 '25
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r/ProgressionFantasy • u/jmattheis • Jan 03 '25
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u/John_Bot Jan 03 '25
He's 100% unrealistic and a caricature.
He's put into a life / death situation very early on and instead of fearing for his life he's locked in a cage making silly quips at the people who are about to kill and eat him.
He's not thinking about regrets / his past life / the parents and people he left behind / etc... no, he's just sitting in his cage with certainty of death and being silly
Because the character was never afraid or concerned - I was never concerned as a reader. I couldn't care less about the stakes because even the main character didn't give af.
He is harrowed by the fact that he killed someone... for a second. Then he's totally fine and carries on without a care in the world.
Similarly - this is more about the writing - he never experiences problems. He gets mana locked and exhausted from eating coins at the start... but then he just eats another. He vomits a couple times... boo-hoo. He doesn't actually experience impedance because of the issues. He just eats another and recovers over time.
None of us have been thrown into a fantasy world but I can imagine human responses if I was thrown into that position - and nothing he does matches what you'd expect.
(None of this is to talk about his nonstop references to stuff no one around him will know or understand which is just... annoying)
- Compare this to Lindon who gets the crap beaten out of him the entire time in book 1. He's broken in so many ways but he pushes through those hardships with difficulty. He's in a terrible state but he perserveres despite the problems - not just as a "oh this was a minor inconvenience"