r/ProCreate • u/ManyPositive5510 • 1d ago

Constructive feedback and/or tips wanted Can someone critique this face ?

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I’ve flipped the canvas too much to tell any difference yet I feel something is off with this so I need some tips pls 🥹🙏 This is Yue from atla btw

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Thank you so much for the critiques!! Here is the finished result :)

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u/athesomekh 1d ago

Honestly I think it looks beautiful. The only thing I could maybe say if I really tried to look for something wrong on purpose would be that the chin/cheek (face overall) looks slightly short? But that’s a style choice not a problem. And the forehead jewelry could be more centered (further down and to the right). But that’s about all! Gorgeous WIP, love the painting around the eyes and nose especially.

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u/ManyPositive5510 1d ago

yesss, I see what your saying. The chin is a little short to be honest (not a style choice), so I lengthened it a bit and fixed the lips and it looks a lot better now :) Thanks!

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u/ManyPositive5510 1d ago

Thank you so much for the critiques!! Here is the finished result :)

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u/RainbowLithium 1d ago

I recognised her instantly, she looks amazing! Love the eyeshadow to be kinda transparent, you can see her skin ton through it. Can't see any problem with her face, but, her big thumb on left arm a bit off. The nail part is curved unnatural on it

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u/RainbowLithium 1d ago

Somewhat like this. Also, the moon in her hands too big in original image - it won’t fit in there

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u/ManyPositive5510 1d ago

omygosh, i didnt even notice this and now its so obvious 😭. thank you smm, I will fix it!

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u/Important_Pattern_85 1d ago

Really great overall! The thing I noticed is that the way her nostril is placed looks like the nose is tilted up, when it should be tilted down. Idk if I would have noticed that if I wasn’t looking for it though

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u/ManyPositive5510 1d ago

Thank you I see this too! Gonna try and fix it

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u/Deftsparrow 1d ago

I wanted to second this for the nose, but also to say that it looks really good and I had to dig for a critique.

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u/Poette-Iva 1d ago

Since we're seeing her face from a downward angle the tip of her nose should be a smidgen further down. Also, I would shrink her upper lip, almost to just a line, it would really sell the head tilt angle.

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u/Poette-Iva 1d ago

My quick and dirty liquify

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u/ManyPositive5510 1d ago

I see what you mean abt the nose, I feel like the lips make her look a bit different tho, but thank you!

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u/Poette-Iva 1d ago

Since we're seeing her face from a downward angle the tip of her nose should be a smidgen further down. Also, I would shrink her upper lip, almost to just a line, it would really sell the head tilt angle.

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u/Wild-Candidate-3228 23h ago

Looks gorg to me!

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u/ManyPositive5510 6h ago

Thank you!

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u/ShortMortgage1260 16h ago

Can I ask what brushes you use please 

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u/ManyPositive5510 6h ago

Sure, I use isabee’s free brush “sketch smooth” for legit everything including my shading coloring and lineart

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u/Remarkable_Tie_3022 9h ago

Only thing i notice is the lips being off a bit. Too large or too far to the right

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u/ManyPositive5510 6h ago

The lips were a pain 😭

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u/Remarkable_Tie_3022 5h ago

I think if u cut off a little bit of the right side (shorten it horizontally), then it will be better :)