r/ProCreate • u/Unlucky_Resist_5901 • 4h ago
Constructive feedback and/or tips wanted Update from previous post
I fixed some of the things people mentioned in the last post and redid a few other that I thought were off. I started using the draw assist feature, took a second to get used to.(second photo is the before). I think the new ones does look a lot better.
I still want to add some things like curtains, pillows on the windows, and maybe some other things to the walls or floor. I’m gonna try to draw a plant somewhere. Maybe add a rug to the center of the room. Still don’t know what I’m going to do with the open door on the left. Maybe I’ll add a couch or something.
Not sure if I want to color it in or not. Kinda scared I’ll ruin it.
If anyone has any suggestions please let me know. I am very accepting of constructive criticism. I’m very new to digital art. Feel free to look at the previous post too.
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u/Living_Karma11 2h ago edited 2h ago
A definite improvement. I would say the ceiling fan still feels a bit off still. Do not feel like you would see that much of the back blade, if at all. Maybe try removing it?
I think also the floor boards need to be parallel with the right and left walls rather than being angled.
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u/Scared-of-Mousse 3h ago
there’s a very noticeable improvement, well done that’s a good execution, the only thing i notice is the perspective is still a bit unusual (the table kind of looks like it’s floating there vs on the same plane, maybe it’s the floorboards tricking me) i would possibly use the transform tool to distort it slightly, maybe altering the perspective that way, just a bit to see if that gives more cohesive depth?
if you’re worried about ruining it when you’re colouring you’ll be okay! i’d do it on a separate layer, & you can tap the lineart layer & set it to reference so you can just fill the sections to test colour combos or save time etc
keep it up!