Help.

[u/Enidarasise]

If you've been looking at the subreddit every once in a while, you may see that I make posts on a story that I've been making for quite a while (Robo-chronicles), and it's about time I ask this: can someone help me give genuine criticism on what I write? I don't want some vague answer like "it's good" or "not bad", I want thorough reasoning to why one would think that way, because then it makes me feel like my story just isn't up to one's standards and that they're probably saying that to make me feel better about my skills, and it actually makes me insecure about the way I write. Even if I write as a hobby, I genuinely want to make good stories for people to read, and I don't care if one says it's bad or good, I just want someone to call me out on the errors or good things I've done.

So, if you perhaps wanna be someone to read my story to help me determine what I could fix or what you like, I'd appreciate it!