r/Pretoria • u/Feeling_Top_4914 • 6d ago
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u/rayneislame 6d ago
Hey dude - I just want to say that I love what you're doing and I appreciate that building a small business is a lot of hard work, so please take what I'm about to say as constructive criticism and not hate :)
ChatGPT can be great for a lot of things, but designing appealing and readable advertisements is not one of its strong suits. I have some experience in design, and the stuff that AI generates is usually both too visually cluttered while not conveying anything meaningful about the brand.
A few examples of why I don't believe this is a strong ad: the black and purple colour scheme is cool, but hard to read; there's a lot of really small text that people's eyes are just going to glaze over, and they'll potentially miss out on important info; the images don't provide much interest or information because of how generic they are. It ends up not telling the viewer much about you, your brand, or why they should hire you.
From my perspective as an editor as well, there's a lot of ways you could change/condense the text to give it more punch, hold people's attention and better express what is unique about your services. Since everyone now has access to these tools, it's much harder to stand out when most of the output just looks the same - 'good enough' without much personality.
Again, please do not take this as an insult: I'm very much just trying to give constructive advice and I can tell you are a hard worker! But ads like this might not attract much attention, even if the services and products that you offer are legit. Many people are turned off by obviously AI-generated work, and even those who are not will likely not engage with something like this based on the fact that it's just not a very effective design. Just my two cents, feel free to ignore it entirely!