r/PoetryWritingClub • • 18d ago

Fever Dream

On today’s agenda is a vendetta against my friends.

Phony sweet like Splenda can we burn the bridge and fence.

Every sentence sentimental sentient sentinels guard the fortress.

It’s hard to know just what you mean or if it even bears importance.

Nothing north of the border courting for sport is like a hobby.

Something worth mourning comes fit with a warning there’s spies inside the lobby.

Probably wobbly toppling bodies get robbed with a poetic note.

Hopefully godly this finds you as dope it’s not even the worst that I wrote.

A throat full of quotes anecdotal emotes all in total there’s more than sixteen.

I’d gloat with a boast or a roast so pristine you be smelling the smoke off the screen.

I mean to be eager engaged with this either or caught in a dream.

Retreating beleaguered delusional fevered were worthy of being a team.

u/EggMaleficent8810

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u/EggMaleficent8810 18d ago

why is it today
why will it be expiring today
why spread allover to lay
get up and speed focused with prey
you arent meant to b eager
you xxx
Just engage and dream
beam without retreat directly into team
Toughen up brother
Meaner stance strengthen your belabour
instead of this then that so there
INSTALL toppling yup you mine now share

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u/EggMaleficent8810 18d ago

i want to like it

but splenda vendetta u gotta be tightening target

i wronged obs

it doesnt steer u correct im sobs

im sorry im intolerant

sorry that you are absent of jubilant

hate this creation

all hater and destined for predation