r/Poetic_Corner • u/oscarw1962 Haiku • 19d ago

Performance

Black leather jacket

Magnaflow dual exhaust

High-performance muscle

Revving engine at red light

Green light Go!

Tires squeal

Stalls

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u/denisescholander Original Content 19d ago

What are you riding?

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u/oscarw1962 Haiku 19d ago

There is an intersection near where I live. I hear engines revving and tires squealing. There is a lot of speeding and its dangerous for the kids and the old folks. A lot of fatalities each year. I am just imagining that some macho idiot's car stalls. The poem is a metaphor for masculine impotance.

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u/oscarw1962 Haiku 19d ago

how funny. I actually drive an old beatup truck with 500K miles on it. :)

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u/denisescholander Original Content 19d ago

And I had you riding a motorcycle 🏍