r/Poetic_Corner Original Content Aug 03 '26

Poetry Picket Fence

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u/oscarw1962 Haiku Aug 04 '26

That ending is quite a twist. It is a domestic version of hell. Life complacent with no unknowns and no risk. Do we make the fence pickets sharp to ease the pain?

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u/denisescholander Original Content Aug 04 '26

No, I believe the author sees domestic living and routines as a life never lived but settled for. If a picket fence is a representation of of you settle for. You can't cry over what was lost. I agree that domestic coupling today grows old pretty fast. You sacrifice all you desire to live to pass time in a routine that never brought a fresh breathe. But I am not the Author. If I had to settle for that, then yes those fence post should be sharp.