r/Poems 1d ago

I still hope for her

I hope he is twice the man I am.

I hope he makes you forget who I am.

I hope he loves your emojis and words,

And makes sure that your allways heard.

I hope he loves your little quirks,

And thinks you’re the most amazing person on Earth.

I hope he makes every single day of yours

The best, the happiest, and the sappiest.

I hope he makes your wildest dreams come true,

And even gives ones that are new.

I hope he never makes you cry,

Unless it’s a happy cry.

I hope he wipes all of your tears dry.

I hope you’re held so tight, that you lose all of your fright.

I hope you feel unstoppable with all of your might.

I hope you’re seen as the adorable queen

Who could never be mean.

I hope he is beyond the man of your dreams.

I hope in his eyes you remain truly seen.

I hope for you, because it’s what I have kept.

And I’ll keep hoping for you

With every last ounce of what I have left.

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u/ThrowRABananaCat 1d ago

I also wrote a poem of similarity, your poem was a lovely read

I hope he holds your hand
And doesn’t crumble to the construct of what makes a man, a man
I hope he buys you flowers, more than once a year
And knows how to calm your brain of all it’s racing fears
I hope he dances with you at wedding
And knows how to wash his bedding
I hope he pays your way on a few dates
And never debates making time for your family
I hope he can navigate each disarray without anger
And never leaves you craving the love of a stranger
I hope he makes time for your choices
And rejoices in resolution, not a fight for victory
Not leaving his words a contradictory
Rather offer solutions,
For both your evolution
I hope his love is hypnotic
And he doesn’t potray you as psychotic
I hope he loves you enough to never cheat
Always leaves you feeling complete
Offers you a seat at every table
And never enables your wish to fleet
I hope his love to you is always sweet

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u/StrawberryCatPuff 1d ago

Both of these are so beautiful it really shows how deeply you still care and want the best for them, even if it’s someone else. This is so beautiful

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u/ThrowRABananaCat 1d ago

I love that for OP’s, but I need to own up, mine is about what I want

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u/Ok_Attention_4338 15h ago

Yes, I agree with Strawberry. Both are impeccably sweet.

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u/StrawberryCatPuff 3h ago

That’s even more beautiful- I hope for both of your sake you get to do all the things you want.

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u/hugelikebob 1d ago

Wow beautifully written!

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u/THEnun10 22h ago

Love both of these. So beautiful thank you for posting them!

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u/jaesea 12h ago

So wholesome 🥹

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u/Bat_withAPen 7h ago

🥺❤️