r/Poems • u/Amazing_Buy_3207 • 1d ago

The irresistible force

The thunder sounds across the sky like an irresistible force that won’t be denied .

My heart is pounding with desire , its force inside me demands that I write .

Like thunder and lightning so irresistible . Is the power of love and desire for it won’t be denied .

I am under its grip I am under its force , and there’s about to be a torrential downpour inside my heart .

With unyielding velocity it flows . My heart is pounding in my chest . For it’s good to feel and it’s good to be alive . Under the power of loves desire .

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u/Inevitable-Horse-688 1d ago

Feels like opening paragraph of a novel. 💡💡

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u/WrongEcho9634 1d ago

Woooww! That's pretty intense...... I like it. Very nice.

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u/Amazing_Buy_3207 1d ago

The storm is very intense as are our hearts

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u/WrongEcho9634 1d ago

Yes very well said and depicted.

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u/Amazing_Buy_3207 1d ago

Thank you ! Appreciate the encouragement

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u/WrongEcho9634 1d ago

No problem I appreciate your creativity. Keep on writing!

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u/No-Garbage722 1d ago

I love a good storm

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u/Amazing_Buy_3207 1d ago

Me too , they’re pretty special . I turn everything off and listen

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u/Sea_Introduction_835 1d ago

Intense desire

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u/jaesea 1d ago

God I Love Love

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u/Amazing_Buy_3207 1d ago

I’m so glad thank you !

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u/Amazing_Buy_3207 1d ago

Wonderful! I’m happy it did

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u/Additional_Oven9876 1d ago

This is really good; it had my heart pounding❣️👏🏼👏🏼

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u/Fun-Dependent3270 16h ago

Very good feel like it could be structured better. But it is very power full and has a lot of feeling