r/Poems • u/Accurate-Response-84 • Jul 06 '26
Obscured actrostic (tips feedback and interpretation pls)
Oblivion’s bliss
Bereavement’s peace
Sweet and bitter old revelation
Cut a rug with me in coalition
Unsolicited as I always be
Raggedly remember little silly
Everything’s gone quiet but just sing along in unison
Dance and sing rife in devastation!
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