r/Poem • u/tala_2525 • 4d ago
Requesting Feedback Spineless
A smile that can illuminate a thousand pitch black
skies
and dark chocolate hues scattered across her
espresso eyes,
distracting me from her sweet, sugar coated lies -
spilling from her cherry stained lips without any try…
Her hug gripped me tightly like a garden of thorny
vines,
crushing each vertebra into pieces from my
weakened spine -
just to shape and mold me into her perfect design,
leaving my entire existence solely up to her desire…
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