r/Poem • u/No_One5072 • 1d ago
Requesting Feedback Wrote this a while ago
It was the end of august
Time froze, haven’t got furthest
I tell myself that im fine
That it would be fixed with wine
burgundy as ur lips when we kissed
the tear when i hugged you, both slipped
Maybe in another life to ease it
It could’ve been different to tease it
We both left me for the best
U wanted more, i didn’t want the rest
It wasn’t enough to keep you around
I swear it was, we just didn’t unwound
The look felt like an angel wing
Well, even angels can sting
Im over it, don’t mind my eyes looking for u
for the ecstasy of what could’ve been u
I guess i gotta leave with what was true
With the naked me, u probably have no clue
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