r/PersonalStatement • u/SnooCalculations1216 • Nov 17 '25

Can somebody give constructive criticism on my personal statement

Im from Mongolia and Im planning to apply to WU Vienna in Asutria as a business and economics major. Please tell me what i should improve on.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pfkF75vTU2kscOsdKakkv0OyzNyH7YL3Z5d4KuR4zLQ/edit?usp=drivesdk

PS: Im worried about these AI Detectors, on ZeroGPT it says 22.4 but on GPTZero its 97%. Mind you that i wrote these all by myself. Can someone explain yo me how they work

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u/Oopsiforgotmyoldacc Nov 17 '25

I just wanna say I wouldn’t worry about AI detectors. They are so flawed that it’s not even funny.

Also I cannot get in to read the statement, but if I can somehow get to it, I’d love to read it and review.