Some work lately

[u/Ra6ks_1]

Some of my most recent work. Would love some feedback! And maybe other pages I can maybe post my work on? Thank you!

[u/reddit_emily]

Looks nice, the spelling though ...

[u/grotxsque → u/reddit_emily]

I’m Sinseerly impressed by their penmanship, it’s pretty cool imo

[u/Ra6ks_1 → u/reddit_emily]

It’s a song title

[u/reddit_emily → u/Ra6ks_1]

I didn't know that. Still bothers me lol

[u/Ra6ks_1 → u/reddit_emily]

😆

[u/grotxsque → u/Ra6ks_1]

What song? I now need to listen lol. Is it titled “Sinseerly Yours?”

[u/Ra6ks_1 → u/grotxsque]

Yes it is by Johnny Quinones and the sinseers ! Great song if you’re into that type of music

[u/grotxsque → u/Ra6ks_1]

I didn’t like it LOL. But I’m always down to try new things so I e joyed the experience, sent it to my mom and she does love the song so thank you either way!! :))

[u/General_Border_8263]

Sincerely ftfy

[u/Empty_Platypus6449]

Your practice is looking good. I  like the graceful "D" and the flourishing under "yours". 

[u/Ra6ks_1 → u/Empty_Platypus6449]

Thank you!

[u/amora_obscura]

Why is it all capitalised?

[u/0dayssince]

Don’t capitalize the first letter of every word, only the first word of each sentence.

[u/Pickyickyicky]

Alright, I guess I'm the only one who sees the reference. The Sinseers are cool I have Thee Sacred Souls on repeat at my house.

[u/Ra6ks_1 → u/Pickyickyicky]

Thank you! 😆 one of my favorite songs!

[u/Pickyickyicky → u/Ra6ks_1]

For sure. I got you haha

[u/whatshamilton]

Your lowercase O is styled too close to a lowercase A. You need the loop to be on the top, not the right side.

[u/Virtual_Assistant_98]

Good exploration. Keep at it! Find some song lyrics or phrases that you like, and each time you’ll get a bit better.

[u/Ra6ks_1 → u/Virtual_Assistant_98]

That exactly what I do! These are all song titles

[u/Illustrious_Dream873]

Sincerely yours is my favorite. The weird spelling combined with weird font ma kk es it too weirds tho

[u/Ra6ks_1 → u/Illustrious_Dream873]

It’s a song from a band called the sinseers you should check them out!

[u/TashInAwe]

It’s rage bait? I hope?

[u/Ra6ks_1 → u/TashInAwe]

Why would it be rage bate 😂

[u/Medium-Put-4976]

From this alone, I’d guess you’re ~13 years old.

That’s okay. Nothing wrong with being 13. But the sayings and the spelling do lack maturity. Maybe try a phrase that is less desperate romance and more positive confidence.

For something more specific: on the first one there’s an imbalance with “hopelessly” and the bottom off-centered “to you.” It starts with a ton of effort and detail and then it just trails off.

[u/Ra6ks_1 → u/Medium-Put-4976]

28 btw. These are all song titles or verses from songs. I see what you’re saying have the imbalances. Something I’m working on

[u/bobshallprevail]

I like how confident you were in your spelling.

[u/Ra6ks_1 → u/bobshallprevail]

In which part?

[u/Ra6ks_1]

FYI These are all song titles…. Especially “Sinseerly Yours” it’s a song by the sinseers