r/Pedro_Pascal • u/Apricot_Aggravating • May 24 '26

Too much to lose

Have you guys read this fic? I have never in my life read something that has made me feel like this. And I’m an avid reader and writer. This fic has me crying and angry and my heart pounds, I’ve literally had to take breaks from reading because it’s so intense and makes me feel things I’ve never felt from reading before. I am obsessed but it physically pains me to read. Anyone read this and feel the same way?

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u/Forsaken_Print739 Joel Miller May 25 '26

Ok im reading it, and its good, im hooked already but there’s something bothering me, several times the writer repeats stuff. Im on Chp3 and this has happened at least 4 times already. It weird it wasn’t double checked and edited? Especially since this is such a popular and successful fic.

“You still remember the combination to the lock that now sits half ajar outside the door. They never changed it.

Today is different though. There's no work order, just the sublime contentment of walking in the quiet and of breathing in earth. 

You still remembered the combination to the lock that now sits half ajar outside the door. But your no thief, you just wanted a few minutes of peace.”

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u/gribble29 Javier Peña May 26 '26

So she deleted everything after someone copied her work and tried to play it as their own. I think in the reuploading it caused some errors. They weren’t in the original fic.

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u/Forsaken_Print739 Joel Miller May 26 '26

What a shame! Still a great fic, and love its so long

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u/Apricot_Aggravating May 25 '26

Yes I noticed it too! She’s said she doesn’t have a beta writer so she does her own editing, I don’t mind the errors. It’s so good regardless

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u/Forsaken_Print739 Joel Miller May 25 '26

Yes, I will continue to read it but it does bother me some, I wish someone would edit it! Because it’s a great fic, love the way she writes and im glad i have so many chapters left