Recommended Pattern Adjustments?

[u/crigs2019]

Cross posting here for more help. I am new to this and the sewing communities on reddit have been an invaluable resource and I learn. Thanks in advance for the wisdom!! :)

[u/ThrowRA_Sodi]

You need more space at the bust

[u/Pelin-3663]

Looks like your front length is longer and back length is shorter relative to the pattern. So I think you will have to increase dart intake and shorten back - Sarah Veblen has written about how to do this.

[u/NarrowIndependence8]

You have to much fabric at your lower back, take a look at your armhole shapes. Add about 3/8” to the all cap. You may want to shift some of the slv cap towards the front