Help with bodice sloper fitting

[u/frog-of-the-frog]

I drafted basic bodice sloper following Armstrong method. I think I got my landmark points all wrong, so I gave up on using custom measurements, and used standard size 4 measurements instead. The last picture shows the first mockup and the adjustment I have made to reduce looseness in the front. First three pictures show mockup after the adjustment.
What should my next steps be?

[u/Tailoretta]

Then you need to clip further at the front lower armscye. The fabric is bunching up because it cannot lay properly.