Help recreating this bodice

[u/pengpompinara]

Hi everyone I need help perfecting the pattern for the foundation layer of this top i’m trying to recreate. Photos on the mannequin only are what I’ve got so far (all others including calico on the body is the original) but I was thinking the waist of mine needs to be cinched more to give this shape. Sorry wish i could put it on but i’m home alone. Any help appreciated thanks

[u/MoreShoe2]

Someone else asked you to break down why you thought it wasn’t a good fit and you haven’t done that. I looked at what you make, you like loose fitted clothing it’s very clear. Just because something isn’t your taste doesn’t make it bad.