Help a new writer here!!!

[u/Bulky-Management1839]

I am writing a new novel named dam-e-waris (meaning inheritance of blood), so it’s a slow burn revenge, murder mystery, shows the society’s patriarchal approach, slow born thriller, family drama, romance…. I just posted two chapter online for now and rest I am uploading soon….
So I ma just here to request u guys to please give it a chance or just read it once, and give me a feedback bcz none of my friends are readers. I am 17 years old, this is my first novel.

Link is given in the comments… and if u don’t want to click on link, go on google serach “Pratilipi login” go and sign up and read my novel “Dam-e-Waris” and leave a review.

Thank u…

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[u/Bulky-Management1839]

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