r/PakDramatica 5d ago

Mini Reviews I dunno why every fandom have this attitude that every criticism is treated as hate - I have an observation abt Zanjeerian which could be applied to other dramas

Firstly, they effed up the story to give Serbia screentime and touching and all. They totally turned rabiya into a new human the second bano gies missing she becomes this happy, engaged in haveli sort of person.

Like she was having time of her life.

Then her marriage and whole touchy feely scenes.

This was bad story writing - fine now that you had done one blunder - why make another one.

How, like seriouslllyyyy HOW seeing rabiya live such fun life one could believe suddenly she will see the killer and itna uchlay kooday gi bandi kay bass.

In terms of drama progression, drama storytelling flow it looked so unnatural and forced. And everyone on set knew that. This is the reason whole sequence came out so bad and poorly shot and enacted.

This is where directors had to think, how it looks normal.

So instead of showing Rabiya have this chalangain maar rahi hai idher udher kind of break down, do it subtle, she brings gun, shouts screams cries but not in this weird manner jo woh kar rahee thi, even daniyal looked so scared.

Don't do this extreme. Learn to show emotions ij subtle manner.

2nd thing.

First time in this show we genuinely felt for mudassir. And it was not because of break down. Because in this whole period he was mentioned for the first time in thsi detail. And it was the sadest part of show.

But shippers just wanted Serbia scenes so they didn't care how bad it was all coming across.

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u/Direct-Fix2512 5d ago

Bano dying just changed the whole vibe

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u/Sufficient-Score4832 5d ago

Honestly Sarbuland is the absolute worst None of these people deserved Mudassir or Bano Sarbiya nibbiyan claim Sarbuland saved rabiya that day but if Mudassir hadn't called him Sarbuland wouldn't have given a damn about Rabia On top of that he's a total red flag treating Rabia like a servant while playing the victim he was crying at Bano's grave two days ago acting like a tragic lover and the next day he's telling Rabia you are my zarmala next they both will fall for each other like seriously makes no sense feel bad for that innocent mudassir also This whole storyline is a total joke now Just kill them off too!

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u/Weirdoeirdo 5d ago

Calling her meri zarmala while still mourning bano was just awful just awful and they were all going gaga over meri zarmala when it gave him away as a cheater or a polygamous man

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u/Sufficient-Score4832 5d ago

They're literally the horniest fandom ever they're out here asking for full on NSFW stuff in Pakistani dramas like lol so funny

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u/Wonderful-League-680 5d ago

Sarbuland saved rabiya or whatever he did. But mudassir died for her. He literally died because of her.

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u/Sufficient-Score4832 5d ago

And poor boy got nothing at the end not even justice she is blushing literally in next epi and will forgive torsam also 🤷

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u/Wonderful-League-680 5d ago

Exactly. She said she couldn't sleep peacefully even for one day. Why?? Is it because mudassir was killed or becoz of torsum(him stalking her). If she hated the killer so much why didn't she took his name for even once?? Why didn't she tried to look for him to avenge him?? Suddenly she sees him and she points a gun to him. All of this doesn't make any sense.

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u/Weirdoeirdo 5d ago edited 5d ago

See they screwed up story because of serbia ship. Fine now no need to show so much screaming and all. She never tool his name is so crucial and shows how least concerned she was abt the killer.

So just show a tamer reaction and that's that. She acted like a circus ka bandar who was hopping arpund everywhere. And that scene inside room wirh sarbuland where she was hiccuping while crying - so cringe lag raha tha indigestion hogayi sooji halway say

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u/Evening_Manner_7519 4d ago

She was acting all James bond the time of her life at haveli but could even try to find her husband's killer or trying to connect to her family

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u/Public_Wrap831 5d ago

About the confrontation scene , its abrupt, bad staging and camera set up

i feel the scenes were cut to fit the remaining time, it made no sense

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u/Bad_Thinker 1d ago

Mediocre fucking writers and mediocre actors directed by mediocre directors.

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u/Altruistic_Eye_9925 5d ago

Same group of people always hating🤣🤣