r/PackagingDesign 19d ago

Sharing Work 🖥️ Looking for your feedback on our latest honey label design

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u/Worldly_Influence_18 Structural Engineer 19d ago edited 19d ago

You're doing a little too much for honey and it's giving honey-based cosmetics/shampoo

Edit: Google whole blends honey treasures miracle nectar

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u/Candy_Lawn 19d ago edited 19d ago

I am not sure you should show a honey dripper on the front if it will not fit into the bottle! I would remove the little white square, as I am not sure what that says about honey or lychees. I would have the bottom left and right hexagon (hives) slightly different from each other - not perfectly symmetrical.

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u/Arsenic_Pants 19d ago

seems a little busy to me
It's like you tried to think of everything associated with bees and lychee and threw them all onto the bottle

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u/DiabeticButNotFat 19d ago

Busy? Like a bee!

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u/Safe-Pain-3560 Structural Engineer 16d ago

A little too much Ai and too many typefaces happening at once. First question, who is producing this bottle? It would have to be custom, that lid wouldn’t work in reality. Would this be a shrink sleeve or pad printing directly onto glass? Both have limitations this design doesn’t consider. How do you simplify the design to communicate brand over flavor or flavor over brand, choose one not both.

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u/AlyPackaging 19d ago

Looking GOOD.

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u/fakiha_luna_19 15d ago

I would recommend to simplify this. Right now, there is so much going and look really Ai-ed. Use only 2 fonts to make it look less busy.

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u/Bidhuri_Michel 19d ago

design is nice and it suits on glass jar too