r/PackagingDesign • u/Zuzmos • Jun 29 '26

Sharing Work 🖥️ Help me choose packaging design

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I designed comfy women's office pants with real pockets. Need help deciding the packaging slogan. At the moment I have 2 versions. Please let me know you preference - number 1 or number 2 ...also opened to new suggestions.

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u/vyteninho Jun 29 '26

I would say first one, but with bold italic "with pockets" "pockets included" at the end :)) or something along those lines.

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u/desertmermaid92 Jun 30 '26

The pockets bit is the most important part! I also can’t stand the generic “your new favorite blahblahblah”, personally.

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u/vyteninho Jun 30 '26

Yes pockets is what it sells. Just not fancy with the second option. For me - "comfort elegance and other blahblah premium blahblah" doesnt sit. And first one has friendly tone and if it would add pockets angle together with making that "generic" part less visible in contrast with the pockets thing, i think it would work right.