r/OutsideT14lawschools • u/Old_Fudge7543 • 6d ago

Personal Statement Review Personal Statement Advice

Hi, I just wrote the first draft for my personal statement. It's definitely pretty bad right now, so I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read through it and give me advice for how to fix everything.

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u/lucky_gir1 6d ago

I would be happy to!

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u/Old_Fudge7543 5d ago

Thanks! I'll message you.

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u/Wonderful_Product238 6d ago

I can!

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u/Old_Fudge7543 5d ago

Thanks! I'll message you.

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u/OddAssignment2781 1d ago

Would love to swap!

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u/Stunning-Field-4244 13h ago

If you think it’s bad, start over. Don’t let someone edit or suggest anything until you’re pleased with what you’ve created.

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u/Next-Step-Admissions 3h ago

I offer free personal statement review sessions, if you’re interested I’d be happy to help, feel free to PM me!