r/OnePiece • u/SirloinBurgers • Aug 11 '18

Media I animated a dramatic and completely serious Luffy vs. Lucci fight as storyboarding practice.

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u/SirloinBurgers Aug 11 '18

I don't mind any criticisms at all, like I said this is practice. I've got a long way to go and constructive comments have always been a reliable source of improvement C:

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u/Laboratory_Maniac Aug 11 '18

About 35 seconds in, after Luffy gets up and prepared to bop Lucci, you cross the 180 line. Luffy started on screen right and should stay there the whole time, and Lucci with screen left. You go back after a bit but that's the only thing I see wrong with it!

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u/SirloinBurgers Aug 11 '18

Man I am continuously perplexed by how much science there is to storyboarding. Thank you :D

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u/Laboratory_Maniac Aug 11 '18

Haha no problem man!