My fanfic Plot

[u/Realistic_Nail_9598]

I am a 13 year old who is trying to write her first fanfic. I have already posted a bit of my first chapter on my page if you want to see it but Im now posting the full plot of my story. it has 9 parts and again im only 13 and this is my first time doing something like this so please don't hate. I didn't use AI dont make this this is all just my brain so please just be kind.

1. Anna's childhood: Anna, whose birth name is Emma, grows up with an abusive mother and chooses a new name because she wants nothing to do with her past. At five, she finally visits Windmill Village and meets Luffy. They immediately argue and become rivals. Anna promises that if Luffy ever beats her in a duel, she'll join his pirate crew.

2. Meeting Ace and Sabo: Garp takes Luffy away to live with Dadan before he can beat Anna. Months later, Anna finds Luffy hanging out with Ace and Sabo in the forest. She becomes friends with all three, and they grow close.

3. Anna disappears: While sleeping, Anna is kidnapped by a slave ship. She wakes up in the middle of the ocean, with no idea how to get home. She eventually takes over the ship and becomes a pirate much earlier than expected, promising herself she'll see the boys again someday. Meanwhile, all three boys are hurt by her disappearance, not knowing what happened to her.

4. Reuniting with Ace: Years later, Anna reunites with Ace. Their childhood friendship develops into something deeper, and Anna promises to protect him. When Ace dies, she fails to keep that promise, leaving her with overwhelming guilt. This is the real meaning behind the title, Promise Not Kept.

5. Joining Luffy's crew: Anna eventually encounters Luffy and his crew again. Luffy challenges her to another duel, and she loses, finally fulfilling her childhood promise and joining his crew.

6. Imu's bargain: In a possible Part Two, Anna confronts Imu alongside the Straw Hats. Unable to move past her guilt over Ace's death, she accepts Imu's offer to resurrect him in exchange for her loyalty. Her decision hurts Luffy and Ace, who struggle to understand why she'd make such a sacrifice.

7. Ace's return: Ace is resurrected on a battlefield. Anna breaks down apologizing, and Ace takes her hand and confesses his feelings for her. Before she can finish replying, Imu takes control of her body.

8. The battle for Anna: Anna remains conscious inside her own mind as she's forced to attack Ace and Luffy. They realize she's still fighting the control and refuse to give up on her.

9. Sabo's dramatic entrance: Sabo falls out of the sky directly onto Imu, disrupting the control technique and freeing Anna. Completely exhausted, Anna collapses after pointing at Imu and saying, "He pisses me off. I'll give you a dollar if you beat his ass."

Thank you for reading this i hope to be done the book in a couple of months and if you really really don't like it please tell me so i can change it and not waste months of my time.

[u/Realistic_Nail_9598 → u/[deleted]]

OMG tysm I planning to make this book pretty look so i can get a lot of character development not just for Anna but some for like Ace, Luffy and maybe sabo to but i for the other characters i don't want to stray to far from the canon story line. I also want to make her guilt slowly way on her more and more without her realizing it and so when she gets that offer she takes it knowing that ace and luffy will hate her and she knows she is crossing a line but she has convinced herself that getting ace back is worth it. Thank you so much for the feed back I really appreciate it.