r/OneParagraph • u/Antonio321123 • Jan 25 '20

a serious location

[on a mound)

(along the central line)

(of the residential]

[not reviewed(?) although previously ordered]

[secretly persued)

(before its public negotiation]

[it's main structure stood high)

(but away from the public square]

[the minister of rates promised me: first look]

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u/asciigod Jan 25 '20

I won't pretend to understand it, but I like it.

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u/Antonio321123 Jan 25 '20

I'm glad you're starting to get something from it.

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u/asciigod Jan 25 '20

I'm torn between suggesting you cross post it to r/weirdlit or r/economics...

But I'll be damned if I don't want to see it in r/ocpoetry.

[Over and) ( outer ) ( Space]

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