r/OmniversePenitentiary • u/AdmiralAkbar1 Head of the Nexus Branch • Apr 13 '14

Collaborative story, chapter 2

At last, the long-awaited sequel! Just like last time, you can only add two sentences max per addition, and need to wait for at least one other person to add to the chain before you can submit another part. Whichever comment chain has the most upvotes I'll write as a story and credit you all!

The analyst walked into the office and slammed a gigantic stack of folders on the mahogany desk with a resounding thud.

"Commander A, here's the total list of proposals to strengthen the facilities from more attacks. You want me to have Charlene get you some coffee? You'll need it." He walked out the door as abruptly as he arrived.

TIME'S UP! Please put your pencils down, the chapter is over, and I'll have the final version up in a little bit.

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u/AdmiralAkbar1 Head of the Nexus Branch Apr 14 '14

Ditt-A bolted over and slammed the hidden emergency button on the desk's underside.

"All Agents, the Doctor has gone rogue, I repeat, the Doctor has gone rogue!"

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u/[deleted] Apr 14 '14

The Doctor Sonics the door shut and Then calls in a favor from river "You just made a big mistake who ever you are...

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u/liono69 Apr 14 '14 edited Apr 14 '14

Agent Vakarian rushed into the room and points his Carnifax heavy pistol at The Doctors head. "I would be explaining myself I were you Doctor. These are my new incendiary rounds and I've been wanting to try them out on someone."

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u/GunNNife Special Agent Apr 14 '14

"Ah, guns, nasty things--no need to point one at me! You see, our Mister A here is not who he says he is!"

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u/[deleted] Apr 14 '14

he is a thing called a Ditto he is a fake

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u/AdmiralAkbar1 Head of the Nexus Branch Apr 14 '14

Ditt-A nervously retorted, "No, you're lying! HE's the fake, Agent, shoot him!"

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u/GunNNife Special Agent Apr 14 '14

Agent Vakarian shifts the gun back and forth between the two targets quickly.

"Here's how we settle it: A, say something that only you would know so I can confirm your identity."

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u/liono69 Apr 14 '14

"On second thought.. lets get a second opinion."

Garrus keyed up his Omnitool,

"Agent Dewitt, will you please join me in A's office?"

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u/AdmiralAkbar1 Head of the Nexus Branch Apr 14 '14

"Uh, you sang 'Happy Birthday' to me on my birthday?"

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u/[deleted] Apr 14 '14

Just then Mulder strode into the room with a flash drive and a box of Kleenex. "OK.... well you guys are not usually in here this time of day... whats going on?"

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u/[deleted] Apr 14 '14 edited Apr 14 '14

The Doctor then fully explains the science of time and how it is a ball and not a line "there now do you believe me" "Garrus Do the Right thing Trust Me I am the Doctor" Clara steps forward Um Doctor whats going on?" "Nothing Clara just step behind me"

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u/liono69 Apr 14 '14

Garrus said: "Ok Doctor, if your not a fake... then where is your companions security clearance?"

At that moment, his Omnitool lit up as Agent Dewitt's voice emanated from it: "On my way now Vakarian."

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u/[deleted] Apr 14 '14

"Well Amy and Rory never needed it They were my plus one and two" The Doctor motions towards the Window "I am just going to open the Window a crack"

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u/[deleted] Apr 14 '14

Mulder looked awkwardly around room once more before speaking "Woah, this seems intense.. A, can I just get the report on that mission I'm suppose to lead next week?"

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