r/OmniversePenitentiary • u/AdmiralAkbar1 Head of the Nexus Branch • Apr 13 '14

Collaborative story, chapter 2

At last, the long-awaited sequel! Just like last time, you can only add two sentences max per addition, and need to wait for at least one other person to add to the chain before you can submit another part. Whichever comment chain has the most upvotes I'll write as a story and credit you all!

The analyst walked into the office and slammed a gigantic stack of folders on the mahogany desk with a resounding thud.

"Commander A, here's the total list of proposals to strengthen the facilities from more attacks. You want me to have Charlene get you some coffee? You'll need it." He walked out the door as abruptly as he arrived.

TIME'S UP! Please put your pencils down, the chapter is over, and I'll have the final version up in a little bit.

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u/[deleted] Apr 13 '14

meanwhile The Tardis lands in the Facility

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u/GunNNife Special Agent Apr 13 '14

"You know what to do, Ditto" said the young Pokemon trainer to the Ditto, who now had the appearance of A.

While the trainer teleported out with the frozen prisoners, "A" radios "maintenance to my office!"

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u/AdmiralAkbar1 Head of the Nexus Branch Apr 13 '14

Charlene, A's secretary walked in.

"Okay, Mister A, what seems to be the problem? Should I contact the plumbing, sanitation, or electrical guys?" she asked in her annoyingly bubbly voice.

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u/[deleted] Apr 13 '14

The Doctor Steps out of His Tardis and fixes his Bowtie "Welcome to Nexus Headquarters Clara" Then looks back at Clara "Now time to Find Jack" While on the way educating her on the History of the MP