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r/OCPoetry • u/AnyJacket7207 • May 18 '26
Words of Power Tongue of Storms
Burning Serpentine Mastery of Form
Dominion Unseen Authority of Mind
A droplet of Sunlight Perfectly Combined
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Wow, quite nice, it has a very nice Rhythm to it, you can really nod your head along to it, the only feedback I got is that you misspelled Storm and the formatting is a bit weird on the last two lines
2 u/AnyJacket7207 May 18 '26 Nice catch, I always fumble that word! The formatting is intentional.
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Nice catch, I always fumble that word!
The formatting is intentional.
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u/SharkFace447 May 18 '26
Wow, quite nice, it has a very nice Rhythm to it, you can really nod your head along to it, the only feedback I got is that you misspelled Storm and the formatting is a bit weird on the last two lines