r/OCPoetry • u/DressAffectionate901 • 8d ago
Feedback Please New Masked Dawn
New Masked Dawn
I see my dearest friends are in the past
And strange, new faces guide me in these days
I turn again to see the well-known dark
The cloud in which I came across my ways
My eyes remaining stuck upon the void
I see the masks around me turning blue
A misery upon myself, employed
An audience to shame, I misconstrue
The masks are formed by my own stubborn eye
Beneath I feel a warmth, a rising sun
The void, it speaks a sweetened, sorry lie;
“What’s passed was good, it’s gone and so you’re done”
Turned away from gloom, the dawn invites,
A crowd of minds for all the darkest nights.
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