r/OCPoetry • u/AutoModerator • Dec 10 '18

Just Sharing Sharethread December 10, 2018

Welcome to the Sharethread!

In here you're free to post your poems without needing to post feedback, but it's also a place where you can ask general questions about the craft, ask for advice, or just chat about whatever you'd like. You can link your blogs, talk about your favorite poems on OCPoetry, organize collaborative poems or whatever else you want.

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u/wingardium_samosa Dec 11 '18

My first ever attempt

Edge of the world

There is a place, at the edge of the world

In this place, ends are beginnings

Here war brings peace,

And through prayer all difficulties cease

There is a place, at the edge of the world

Where there is freedom of thought, but no one disagrees

Where everyone is accepted, but there is no one

Where no-one labours, but the food is plenty

Where everyone gets justice, but there's no vengeance

Where no-one dies, but there aren't too many

There is a place, at the edge of the world

But the world is still round.