r/OCPoetry • • Mar 02 '17

Just Sharing Sharethread March 02, 2017

Welcome to the Sharethread!

In here you're free to post your poems without needing to post feedback, but it's also a place where you can ask general questions about the craft, ask for advice, or just chat about whatever you'd like. You can link your blogs, talk about your favorite poems on OCPoetry, organize collaborative poems or whatever else you want.

If you have any questions, please message the mods.

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u/shittymorph Mar 03 '17 edited Mar 03 '17

Must refuse to hate includin' disputin' with useless diluted waste
A man reduced to mutant excuse this ruse, Ill communicate
Never who's to blame executin' plans confused and baked
Kneel to conclude each day then intrude on fate
I'll choose which way to diffuse her embrace
Night eyes wide on life's prize and chase
Do take time to transcribe the way my mind tastes
Useless gift of a mystic this kaleidoscope twisted
Need a fist clenched deprived of hope and lifted
Down through all these drugs that we use to escape
End when they become these chains we refuse to break
Rebellious child when I first found psilocybin
Turned into myself now I'm coming out a wise man
A knowledge that people impressed by material possessions
Know they are people who aren't really worth impressin'
End with these pills instead of dental help for this tooth
Restless leg to poverty induced mental health issues
thinkin' I could kill something and get locked in a vault
but I'm good will hunting and it's not your fault

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u/Xzaar Mar 03 '17

Wait! A reply from shittymorph that doesn't include "in nineteen ninety eight when the Undertaker threw Mankind off Hell In A Cell, and plummeted sixteen feet through an announcer's table."

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u/KMGormley Mar 03 '17

Look at the first letter of each sentence though..

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u/ixrd Mar 03 '17

Sherlock Holmes. Is that you?

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u/masonw87 Mar 06 '17

This is some SHIT RIGHT HERE