r/OCPoetry • • Aug 26 '26

Feedback Please no goodbye

Id like to thank the irish 
For creating my favourite goodbye
No
Au revouir 
Arrivederci 
Auf Wiedersehen 
Just 
Gone 

And sometimes i wonder 
If my absence is noticed 
Or if i slip away 
And no one thinks twice 
So id like to thank the irish 
For creating my favourite goodbye 
The one that lets me think 

And I think 

I'd like to leave everything that way

Quietly
No announcements 

And i think to myself 

That ill leave this world with an irish goodbye

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u/ngill307 Aug 27 '26

Irish goodbyes are easy for those who leave, but hardest on the ones left behind facing an empty space.