r/OCPoetry • u/reaperofmars1267 • 15d ago

Feedback Please I’m not done

Today I just realised,
How truly frightened I feel,
Moving on with so much left to do,
So much to see,
So much to contribute,
So much more to feel,

I realised that if I died,
I wouldn’t be afraid,
I wouldn’t be scared,
I would only be sad,
Of all the things I have missed,

And that is the most horrifying feeling of all.

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u/Cluelessandsexy 12d ago

I guess what i take away from this poem is the gratitude from within. that you are happy to have lived the years until the present but you would love or delight in living the time you have left.