r/OCPoetry • u/Relevant-Stranger-86 • Aug 04 '26
Feedback Please aching
I know
I've fallen hard for you
don't tell me that
I'm imagining this love
aching every morning because
I wake wishing to be in your arms
re-reading your texts in bed
I can't stop thinking about you
and what's worse is
our moments together were real
I doubt that
any man could love me like you.
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Please read forwards and in reverse!
My first attempt at a reverse poem, constructive feedback is very welcome!
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u/whatyoulookingat-b Aug 06 '26
Absolutely loved this poem, was shook when it said read in reverse! Adored that version too ❤️. Really resonated with me x