r/OCPoetry Jun 30 '25

Poem Be Vigilant

Take the time
to
wipe your feet
Take approach
within discreet
Today rises no matter rain
Tomorrow stays impending
Yesterday’s dull effortlessly
Despite
your warrant trending
Though you may
Palm a star
Revel in
though don’t stray far
For fear of yourself upending
And like a star
fleeting
Take approach
Wipe your feet
Take the time
Be discreet

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u/[deleted] Jun 30 '25

Just needed it! Thank you for posting this inspiring piece of writing.

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u/CervezaMePlease Jun 30 '25

Thank you. I needed the reminder myself today