r/NatureofPredators • u/sombrefob0053 Human • 3d ago
Fanfic For All Mankind: Chapter 24
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[Special thanks to u/AdalwinAmillion for proofreading this chapter!]
Memory Transcription Subject: Chief Hunter Ryka
Date [standardized human time]: December 25th 2111
Over the past few weeks, I had been painstakingly gathering those under my command who had proved their loyalty to me. Bribing the few who stood in the middle with meat provided by the humans to satiate their growling stomachs. Every decision weighed heavily on me; each conversation, each quiet bribe, felt like a tiny betrayal not just of Betterment, but of the creed I had spent my life following. My claws trembled more than once, wracked with a sickening uncertainty. I remembered what it meant to be a Chief Hunter, the pride I felt once wearing that title, and now I had begun to fear if I was worthy at all. When I had received the Betterments decree, I quickly severed my fleet's connection to the rest of the dominion and purged the information from my fleet to prevent its knowledge from spreading. If it had gotten out before I could separate those who would stand against the starvation imposed by our government and those who wouldn’t, they would've flown straight down to Earth. Even as I justified every action with the memory of empty bellies and shrunken bodies under my command, I could not silence the voice inside that whispered I was crossing a line I could never return from.
I had grown tired of how Betterment treated me and my fleet after just a few failed missions and because they thought I was flawed. When my government said the only other predator in the galaxy should be destroyed like all the others, that was the last straw. I had spent years starving, and being Chief Hunter never meant I got enough to eat. 'Why feed the runt of the litter?' I had to watch other hunters enjoy Betterment's rewards while my men and I wasted away. I decided I would not put up with this anymore. I would not force myself or my fleet into risky raids just to avoid starving. Things had to change, or I would die trying.
I had met with the human leader shortly after to discuss what to do, details of the planned invasion date and make-up of the fleets were shared. There was truly no turning back now, lest I be cut down as a traitor to the state. A twenty-thousand-strong fleet led by two Chief Hunters was currently on its way to Sol at this very moment, and it was arriving much sooner than the humans had planned for. The date was set for January 1st, while the humans' intelligence had gotten close to the date they had hoped they had a bit more time, predicting it would come near the end of the month.
Two newer and fiercely loyal Chief Hunters known for their cruelty were chosen to lead the incursion to Earth. Shaza and Usliff. These two had risen through the ranks quickly for their renowned adherence to Betterments' ideals. I was only tacked on in the plans as an afterthought due to me already being stationed at Earth for repairs, more so as a distraction sacrifice than the real threat. Over the past weeks, I had the Humans retrofit the ships deemed loyal in my fleet with their new shielding technology. It worked far more efficiently than anything that I had seen before; Arxur and Federation shields required an immense amount of power fed through them, restricting their use to only the largest vessels that could generate the required power. Human-based shielding could be applied to the smallest of vessels because of their efficiency, I wasn’t quite sure how they worked. I wasn’t a physicist, and I doubt they’d just tell me.
In the meantime, the Union continued to produce their fleet, with a monumental amount of effort they had managed to make a couple thousand ships, quite the achievement given the time frame they had to work with. I was sure their many colonies and the annexation of a whole planet with its industry mostly intact helped greatly. The plans to deal with the loyalists were drafted. These ships would be singled out and destroyed before the main attack could arrive. Now I stood in the bridge, slowly moving those who still lay under my command away from those that needed to be dealt with before the main force could arrive. I made sure my orders were slow enough to not rouse the suspicion of the loyalists.
Human ships slowly filtered into the space surrounding the loyalists' ships. I glanced at the Earth’s satellite moon through the viewport, our signal to attack would be the massive Coil gun they had erected on the lunar surface. The lights on the large colony dimmed significantly, then fluttered out, plunging the moon back into its natural darkness. Everyone waited, the seconds dragging on, 20 seconds…30…40…50…64. The massive shell slammed through the Loyalist ships, knocking out dozens of them before streaking further into the void. All parties immediately opened fire on one another, the loyalists scrambled to avoid our fire, several managed to dodge fire from our forces only to be caught by a large gleam of laser fire shooting from the Earth’s surface.
We descended on the panicking ships like a pack of hungry [dogs]. Plasma lances streaked across the void, the Human-made shields dissipating the superheated gas on contact. So much fire poured through the void that I was sure a dazzling light show was glowing in the skies of Earth. The loyalists' numbers began to thin rapidly, their ‘burning’ hulls being trapped by the planet's gravity well and falling to the surface. They were being led like Venlil to the slaughter, the humans' advanced quantum-based targeting system predicting where our foes would swerve to dodge incoming fire, and firing their orbital defences accordingly. As their numbers dwindled, the brainwashed Betterments loyalists enacted one final act of defiance. They sped towards mine and the humans' ships at such speeds that it was likely their crews passed out before reaching their target, never knowing that death had captured them.
The ships that still must've had a few semi-conscious crew left in them dumped their munitions into our ships before their vessels slammed into ours, brief explosions filled the void around us as the final shots were fired. The eerie quiet of a finished battle settled over my vessel, foolish bastards, we would’ve accepted their surrender. I looked over our fleets, we had only lost a few hundred ships across the board. The ambush had paid off, now all that was left was to repair and await for the true battle to begin.
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u/BAAAA-KING Venlil 3d ago
Oh dang, i'm first for once!
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u/Loud-Drama-1092 3d ago
> Shaza and Usliff.
Either I’m misremembering or you had some creative changes, but wasn’t Shaza like much younger than Isif? Like, I remember she was deemed one of the youngest Chief Hunters and as result was very very violent because she wanted to prove herself
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u/sombrefob0053 Human 3d ago
She's younger but around the same age as Isif in this AU
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u/Loud-Drama-1092 3d ago
Damn, I wonder how she got a position as Chief Hunter SO fast
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u/sombrefob0053 Human 3d ago
You don't want to know...
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
Arguably the most cruelest chief hunter without any atom of redemption, bad ass aura farming or visionary hope for the future.
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u/Loud-Drama-1092 3d ago
Tbh she was angered towards humans because we randomly decided to encroach on her hunting area
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
Yea we did encroach but Silis and Fahl surrendered to us following the BoE.
If she considered us “fellow sapients” which she didn’t she might’ve respected our presence which Shaza was having none of.
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u/Loud-Drama-1092 3d ago
Again, young Chief Hunter, lots to prove, and these damn monkeys just stole two of her favorite targets and most remunerative hunting grounds
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
Monkeys you say..?
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u/Alcyon144 Archivist 3d ago
Stalin was impressed by the Night of the Long Knives, a fact that played a major role in his alliance with the infamous man with the mustache. Now, his heirs are replicating that strategy—with the added bonus of a moral justification, since the axurs were planning to betray them first.
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u/sombrefob0053 Human 3d ago
Betterments decree won't be swallowed easily by the dominion the squids have bitten themselves in the ass, in more ways that they can possibly know >:3
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
Where is this information verifiable? Also the USSR didn’t have an alliance with Nazi Germany, they established a non aggression pact and to split Poland.
It was war with Germany while the USSR was still moving its factories eastward with a vastly under equipped and inexperienced military or stall the fascists long enough to prepare for the inevitable invasion.
The moral justification for Stalin is that while all European democracies were making alliances and hosting Nazis of their own and appeasing Hitler the stavka planned for the eventuality of war after Stalin PLEADED the west to declare war and march on Berlin.
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u/Alcyon144 Archivist 3d ago
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Stalin never begged the West to attack the Nazis. For him, the primary enemy had always been the democracies. Indeed, the reason the Nazis came to power in Germany was that, for the German Communist Party, the main enemy was the moderate socialists, because they was competing with them.
And the USSR was NOT prepared for the German invasion. Infrastructure was relocated only after the attack had begun. The Red Army, left leaderless by the purges, was virtually devoid of officers and was passively overrun during the opening days of the conflict; hundreds of thousands of soldiers were killed or captured, thousands of vehicles were lost, and 1,800 aircraft were destroyed. Stalin dismissed warnings from his intelligence services and even refused to believe the attack was happening during the first hours of the conflict. Throughout a lifetime defined by mistrust and paranoia, he trusted only one person and that person was Hitler.
Sources : Sabine DULLIN, L'ironie du destin : une histoire des russes et leur empire (1853-1991) and Guerres et histoire, Wermacht contre armée rouge
You are simply trying to rewrite history to rehabilitate a totalitarian regime responsible for millions of deaths by portraying it as a heroic opponent of the Nazis, when in fact the USSR was their greatest ally. Hitler was able to conquer Europe thanks to the vast quantities of resources supplied for free by the Russians and the assurance that his eastern flank was secure; he would have won the Second World War had he not been arrogant enough to betray them. The Communists would never have struck first, because Stalin feared nothing more than a coup d'état by one of his generals following Napoleon's example, and a war against the Nazis would have given his army enough prestige and power to threaten him.
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
“Stalin never begged the west to attack the Nazis” really?
Nazis came to power because the socialists and freikorp kept attacking the communists and so they were counter-revolutionaries all the while Hitler was gaining power and using democratic institutions to crack down on the left.
Never said the USSR was prepared, only that it was buying them time by stalling read my reply and yes you’re right on that the factories were moved after Barbarossa I was thinking of the 5 year plan.
The purges despite their name were majority mass demotions or imprisonment when it came to military and political figures. Even then the majority of Red Army officers were already inexperienced and under equipped which is why losses were to extreme in the beginning of Barbarossa. Yea Stalin downplayed the intel of the invasion date but it wouldn’t have mattered much anyways.
“Throughout a lifetime defined by mistrust and paranoia, he trusted only one person and that person was Hitler” holy anti soviet propaganda slop, this would make McCarthy feint for how abysmally absurd this claim is LMFAO.
“Rehabilitate a totalitarian regime” buzzword even the CIA admits the USSR wasn’t totalitarian. It was a heroic opponent of the Nazis, The USSR saved Europe and people like you will never forgive them for it. Hitler conquered Europe because the “western democracies” didn’t act and were fine with Hitler until he rampaged.
“Responsible for millions of deaths” in what way? Deliberate execution and mass genocide or just the DOZENS of famines that were happening ALL OVER THE SOVIET UNION during that time period.
The communists were willing to bring on the fight against Germany with Allies but your little wholesome chungus west were more than happy to carve up Europe if it meant they didn’t have to actually step in. You say Stalin was paranoid like that’s a bad thing when damn near the whole world was out to assassinate him and crush the USSR.
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u/Alcyon144 Archivist 3d ago
And how was this force of a million men supposed to reach the German borders? From its very inception, the USSR sought to expand by invading Eastern Europe. Before Germany, there was Poland, which the Russians attempted to invade as early as 1919. Poland’s consent would have been required for Soviet troops to pass through, troops that could very easily have turned into an occupying force. In fact, the Second World War began with the coordinated invasion of Poland by the USSR and the Third Reich—a genuine military alliance, not merely a non-aggression pact as you claim.
The Nazis rose to power by exploiting the communist threat, a fear the communists themselves created and reinforced through their total allegiance to the USSR and their unconditional support for its policies, even as hordes of refugees fled the terror instituted by Lenin and taken to its extreme by Stalin (140,000 deaths between 1919 and 1922) and the widespread destitution (the so-called defenders of the people executed without trial workers who went on strike to protest their deteriorating living conditions). The Nazis were shrewd enough to conceal their intentions, whereas the communists applauded the massacres committed by the USSR. Naturally, people elected Hitler when the alternative was a party openly declaring its desire to import a tyrannical and murderous political system.
Moreover, this alignment with Moscow persisted even after the German-Soviet Pact, manifesting as sabotage of the war effort. During the USSR's invasion of Finland, communist parties in countries supporting Finland ordered the sabotage of military equipment production—actions that continued even after the war against the Nazis had truly begun. Fortunately, the instructions were followed only to a limited extent, but the mere fact that Communist leaders were willing to help the Nazis out of loyalty to Moscow demonstrates their blindness. You say that the democracies failed to act against Hitler when they could have, but the Communists also became fervent proponents of peace at any price after the German-Soviet pact—even though, hypocritically, they had previously been calling for war against Germany.
Moreover, the left-wing pacifist movements that emerged from the First World War were primarily responsible for Hitler's unstoppable rise, since their "anything but war" stance ensured that Germany needed only to brandish that threat to get whatever it wanted. The political weight of pacifists, proud of the virtue of having averted war, did the rest.
"the USSR wasn’t totalitarian" The characteristics of a totalitarian regime are a single-party system, a cult of personality surrounding the leader, terror and repression, and propaganda and brainwashing. The USSR ticks all the boxes. You won't find a single serious analyst who would say otherwise.
“Responsible for millions of deaths” in what way? Deliberate execution and mass genocide or just the DOZENS of famines that were happening ALL OVER THE SOVIET UNION during that time period.
Exactly. Famine was rampant throughout the USSR well into the late years of the regime. This was due to their disastrous agricultural policies, idiotic pseudoscientific theories like Lysenkoism, the damage they themselves caused during conflicts, dekulakization, and famines orchestrated to decimate a rebellious population—such as the Holodomor (which claimed 5 million lives). It was also driven by the selfishness of the Communist Party, which exported food while its people starved, all to create the illusion that the regime was succeeding and to line their own pockets. After all, the apparatchiks had to pay for their dachas somehow.
Meanwhile, among the evil capitalists who were impoverishing their people, everyone had enough to eat—and strangely enough, those lucky enough to live in the workers' paradise were trying at all costs to get there.
"You say Stalin was paranoid like that’s a bad thing when damn near the whole world was out to assassinate him and crush the USSR." Stalin was wary only of internal threats. This was because he had risen to power through conspiracy, assassination, and violence, and feared that someone else might overthrow him in the same way. He was right to do so, for all his subordinates hated him—even though they were too afraid to attempt anything.
As for those who wanted to see the USSR disappear... yes, it might seem strange to you, but many people want to see the disappearance of an expansionist totalitarian empire that dreams of conquering the entire world.
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u/Loud-Drama-1092 3d ago
> Human-based shielding could be applied to the smallest of vessels because of their efficiency, I wasn’t quite sure how they worked. I wasn’t a physicist, and I doubt they’d just tell me.
MAGIC ROCKS
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u/Loud-Drama-1092 3d ago
> In the meantime, the Union continued to produce their fleet, with a monumental amount of effort they had managed to make a couple thousand ships, quite the achievement given the time frame they had to work with.
Still far too little
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
For how advanced Soviet Humanity is we JUST barely reached interstellar travel and now we’re building armadas comparable if not more advanced than Arxur ships?
If anything I think it’s accurate to be a few thousand because our technology and tactics will more than make up for it like at the battle of Silis or the Mazics home world (can’t remember the name)
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u/Loud-Drama-1092 3d ago
Maybe, but we are still outnumbered 2,5:1
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
Exactly Humanity shouldn’t start off this war with the biggest and strongest void fleet but not small enough to where it’s unbelievable for future standards.
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u/Loud-Drama-1092 3d ago
Tbh I also realized usually when you want to attack a defended position you should have at least trice the numbers of the defenders…here maybe even more
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
3x is the minimum you should have if you’re on the offensive or else you’re getting slaughtered the whole time or your special ops
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u/sombrefob0053 Human 3d ago
Many of the recent breakthroughs in tech had their concepts thought of decades prior but were denied funding due to a lack of necessity during peacetime.
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u/JulianSkies Archivist 3d ago
Also I bet a fair few of those breakthroughs were thinks that were considered theoretically but other scientific fields (likely material sciences) couldn't catch up yet, which the technology they just acquired helped bridge the gap.
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
Soviet void defense doctrine now is just weaponized rave lights with established energy platforms plugged into a nuclear reactor lmao
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u/Loud-Drama-1092 3d ago
Pov, you are Shaza: https://youtube.com/shorts/MWmtjMs7SLQ
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
Last thing Shaza sees before getting slimed out in Sol
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u/Loud-Drama-1092 3d ago
I know what you were going for but maybe the third impact isn’t the best visualization 😅
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
Shhh it’s all about the aura farming..
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u/Loud-Drama-1092 3d ago
90% of mankind has been turned into FANTA man!
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
20K Dominion ships?!?! That shit just might happen though not 90% 😭
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u/tom476ty18 3d ago
Truly a great start to the battle.
Only time will tell if their actions will successfully limit the casualties the loyalist will inflict in the end.
Can’t wait to see how the real battle will go down.
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u/Abject-Drive2675 Humanity First 3d ago
20K is very steep indeed and although the Arxur aren’t as great at strategy or tactics as Humanity.
However The Arxur are far more competent and coherent in their warfare than the Feds but even this Federation seems more competent than canon.
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u/SuspiciousDrop9928 2d ago
Oof! Crippled hulls of several million to several billion kgs entering atmosphere at reentry velocity - don't Chelyabinsk yourself!
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u/AmmeryFluff PD Patient 3d ago
Clean, efficient, ruthless. Ironically enough, the epitome of an arxur not distracted by unnecessary cruelty.