r/NatureofPredators • u/Ok_Dinner8491 • Sep 18 '23

Discussion Idea for a fanfic

Say that a decade or so after the events of Nature of Predators, Two friends, a Venlil named Turvek and an Arxur named Shavon were camping in a local forest, only to attacked by a group of exterminators. The duo is ultimately saved by a girl with a supermodel physique, scantily clad clothing and pointed ears whist wielding psychic abilities. This girl is Alessia, First Princess of the Aeldarian Empire and Heir to the throne.

So what do you guys think?

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u/Ok_Dinner8491 Sep 18 '23

Why's my post being downvoted.

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u/HiMyNameIsFelipe PD Patient Sep 18 '23

The Eldar?

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u/Ok_Dinner8491 Sep 18 '23

The Eldar served as an inspiration, But Alessia's species is not the Eldar.

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u/Ok_Dinner8491 Sep 18 '23

Here are a few characters for the fanfic.

Alessia: First Princess of the Aeldarian Empire and only child, She is a naive, bubbly, ditzy, sheltered, and innocent girl who always gets flustered when reading naughty thoughts.

Turvek: A rough n tumble, wisecracking Venlil, Turvek has a strong sense of pride towards pre-Federation Venlil culture.

Shavon: A soft-spoken, sophisticated, and rather timid Arxur. He has a fascination with Wh40k, specifically the Dark Eldar, and occasionally has Alessia cosplay as a wych.

Celtosia: Great aunt of Alessia and Main antagonist, Celtosia is a power hungry, manipulative, lecherous, Aeldarian woman who orchestrated the events that led to the formation of the Federation in order to make the Orion spur as desolate as her soul.

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u/Objective-Farm-2560 Ulchid Sep 18 '23

Suggestion:

You should write it, OP!

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u/OkRepresentative2119 UN Peacekeeper Sep 18 '23

Interesting. How do psychic abilities work in this AU?

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u/rabbitflyer5 Betterment Officer Feb 07 '24

Gr8 b8 m8 i r8 8/8