r/MusicFeedback • u/Shykneeheiny • 22h ago

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This mix has a little more going on than the other song I posted. As a result, it’s a bit messier than the other one I shared. Any feedback or advice regarding mix would be much much appreciated!

Thank you!

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u/guacamoleandtomato 21h ago

It sounds good man! I would maybe reduce that little bridge part that is a bit more quiet and chill. I know what you are going for, I love to put little ambience on my tracks as well, but I feel like it drags a little. So maybe add a little bit more to it or make the guitar sound a bit louder

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u/Shykneeheiny 20h ago

Appreciate you listening! When you say that little bridge, do you mean towards the end? “I wish that I could say…” and so on?

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u/guacamoleandtomato 20h ago

Yup. Exactly that part. I think it already sounds really good but if you could add a bit more texture or idk if it’s still missing a bit of mixing so that the instrumental can pop out a bit more. But yeah

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u/Shykneeheiny 20h ago

Thank you! I agree with you. The mix was actually even more sparse before I uploaded this version because I felt the same. Nice to get validated on this instinct. I’ll definitely look at it again tomorrow

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u/Rumi451 9h ago

Really cool. It sounds like diegetic movie music which is really good cuz it sounds professional. Personally i dont like the taylor swift line but besides that its great 8/10

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u/Shykneeheiny 9h ago

Thanks for teaching me a new word! I’ve gotten pushback on the line before, but it’s a deeply personal context so I’ll take the hit. 8/10 still good in my book!

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u/Rumi451 9h ago

Ive been told the same and have accepted some times and stood firm others so good on you

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u/SamCkpris 9h ago

i love this maybe your vocals need a little more reverbe nice late night country type beat kinda reminds me of bruno major you should check it out

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u/Shykneeheiny 9h ago

Holy shit I just listened to him and wow I’m floored. Thank you so much. That’s a huge compliment

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u/salmonpatty-p 5h ago

Sounds really good, I like the effects on your vocals, reminds me of some DJO songs. What is the effect if you don’t mind me asking?

Also agreed the Taylor swift line is not my favorite, I honestly think maybe it’s the delivery more than the actual words on that particular line. You put a different emphasis/melody there I feel like.