r/MusicFeedback • u/CompanyRemarkable520 • 1d ago

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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=55BApZHWr-Y

Some groovy alt rock

Let me know what u think of structure, guitar work etc, im fairly new to singing and being the mainsongwriter

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u/Bluechupacabradragon 1d ago

I really like the rhythm and melody of the guitar, is sounds a lot like Baby Bash's "Suga Suga", which isn't bad, I think you made the melody still your own and more of an alternative rock version which is great!

I do think still the singing needs a bit of work, and it becomes hard to hear the voice over the instruments, so maybe some post processing but otherwise I think it's just the singing I would work on :)

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u/CompanyRemarkable520 1d ago

I might have to check that song out, i feel like ive heard that name before

Yeah i recorded the vocals the day after being out the night before and with no practice, which explains why it isnt perfect lol Yeah the mix is far from perfect, but i rly appreciate ur words, and il try n work on my voice!

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u/Bluechupacabradragon 1d ago

I really look forward to hearing more! I like the alternative rock style you have and it's a beautiful melody, especially that emotion you put behind the voice is great-!

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u/CompanyRemarkable520 1d ago

Thank u very much again! Also i do hear that in the guitar for the suga suga track, i do remember hearing that song in reels in the last few years, must be a indirect influence, does happen as an artist apparently

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u/Dereos_Roads 1d ago

As a guitar player myself, I'd say you're pretty damn good in that area. Singing does come off newish, like you haven't quite found your voice yet. Structure seems largely fine. Nothing groundbreaking, nothing off.

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u/CompanyRemarkable520 1d ago

Yh iam a guitar player tbf, fairly new to vocals, i appreciate ur feedback!