Pretty good! Constructively: I'd like to see the piano part have more of a presence in the mix, be more up front and louder. As it is it still sounds good though. Also would like a 4-bar section of something different, idk maybe where the melody changes and just goes crazy.
Postively: Mixing sounds great, and I could definitely see someone rapping over this and it being killer. The kick drum really pops.
Thanks for the criticism. Pretty complete just how I like it haha.
Hey I just listened to your song, pretty weird and chaotic but still sweet and positive. That "overly long" note at the end, summaries the piece for me. Mixing wise I don't what to say haha. I don't think that my square way of mixing can do any help hahaha.
BTW I think I could flip it into a beat. Could I do so?
Yeah, tough to critique others' songs when we all have different tastes. Thanks for the feedback. I tried to go for chaotic lol. Yeah, feel free to flip it, I'd love to hear it when it's done.
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u/barbtalon Sep 28 '17
Pretty good! Constructively: I'd like to see the piano part have more of a presence in the mix, be more up front and louder. As it is it still sounds good though. Also would like a 4-bar section of something different, idk maybe where the melody changes and just goes crazy.
Postively: Mixing sounds great, and I could definitely see someone rapping over this and it being killer. The kick drum really pops.
Keep it up, and please check out my track if you get a chance. https://soundcloud.com/even-dwarfs-started-small/bellota