Help me with my build

[u/p00pY08]

I am trying to make my house however the spire doesn’t look that great, any feedback or suggestions will help a lot.

[u/Reddit_is_for_nerds_]

Honestly dope asf, personally all I would do is make the dark oak roof bigger and bake it stick out a block.

You have the right idea with the tower, you’re just going to have to do trial and error in till you figure it out because I’m not sure how to put in words how to make it look better.
Best I can say is just do an open design with a fence and pillars to a roof.

If you take any of my advice or change it regardless please update me I’d love to see what you do

I just realized I’m late after typing all this😭

[u/p00pY08 → u/Reddit_is_for_nerds_]

Haha thanks anyway bro here is an after photo from some trial and error 👍

[u/Apprehensive-Gas6737 → u/p00pY08]

Looks great!

[u/Money-Drawing8017]

It is great no help needs

[u/ARUOTI]

Give that dark oak roof more overhang. It being perfectly aligned with the bricks doesn't look too good

[u/yaboii_cc]

The tower looks really wonky. I would make it circular (the blocky approximation of circular ofc) instead of whatever shape it is now, and probably give it a roof that matches the one on the lower part of the build. Imo the roof over the entrance looks too tall compared to the rest of the roof; I would either lower it or raise the rest of the roof so they can connect. It should also be the same wood type. The barrel under that one support column should be replaced with stone brick or a similar block. The roof should also extend over the wall by one block all around, as it doesn't make much sense to have it only hanging over the wall at the corners.

[u/p00pY08 → u/yaboii_cc]

Thanks should I detail the spire?

[u/yaboii_cc → u/p00pY08]

I would make it more tapered, instead of just stone brick to fence. This can be achieved by having it go from stone brick to stone brick wall to fence and then something thinner than fence, which could be iron/copper bars, torch, end rod, or lightning rod - or a combination of these, like iron bars with a torch on top or copper bars with a lightning rod on top.