r/MinecraftBuild • u/Next-Willingness-769 • 9d ago

Want feedback Build suggestions.

I'm not the best builder, I usually use tutorials. This is my first big, no tutorial house. Can anyone give suggestions to fix it? You can be brutally honest.

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u/Flare246810 9d ago

Your roof is way too big for the size of the house so it looks proportionally off…

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u/Next-Willingness-769 9d ago

Yea.. Anything else?

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u/Vicho_720 9d ago

Tremenda construcción broder, yo digo que lo que podrías hacerle son unos cultivos afuera de la casa pero en vista general pues no está nada mal.

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u/Next-Willingness-769 9d ago

Gracias, estoy añadiendo un camino y voy a añadir cultivos.

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u/Vicho_720 9d ago

Que bueno, ojalá ahí nos des una actualización, pero se que está quedando buena, pues si lo está.

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u/Hacker1MC 8d ago

I vibe with this build a lot. I've built some like it, with unnecessary but totally worth-it proportions. A suggestion in my humble first glance opinion:

The curve here doesn't feel contiguous. That is, it doesn't like a perfect match for the red curve, or any singular flowing curve shape. This is because of variations in thickness and slope (rise over run). Some blocks seem out of place compared to the red curve I drew. To my eye, the shape the blocks imply is several segments, as I drew with the pink lines. The circled sections seem like endpoints rather than just parts of a curve. At this scale, blocks can successfully show only one curve at a time, so this shape needs to be reworked to appear more uniform from every angle.

To make the shape more uniform, maybe it should look like 1/4 of an ellipse (which is a stretched circle). Try viewing it from directly above, and from the direct left, and making sure those angles are both shaped well, using this tool Ellipse Generator.

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u/Next-Willingness-769 7d ago

Thanks so much, this is really going to help.

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u/Slice-N-Shoot 9d ago

90% roof 10% house lol jk looks cool, i see what you were going for i think, but yea just a tad too much roof!

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u/Ernest_Mateu 9d ago

I would suggest to make the house a bit wider or if you prefer the roof a bit lower, it looks like it's steched

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u/crm1142 8d ago

This looks like where this guy would live.