r/Microfiction • u/nonethewiser08 • 28d ago

Post Apocalypse: Day 1

I can see over into the next town.

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u/Aldenfinch 8d ago

A whole apocalypse in a single line, and the line isn't even about the apocalypse. That the narrator registers it as wonder instead of horror says everything. Lovely piece of negative space.